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Post by EmilyDfan on Apr 17, 2017 19:51:03 GMT
Here are the only Rules I have for Fan Fiction here
1. Keep it PG and PG13 ONLY!
2. NO Dirty and Inappropriate Stories and Subjects And No Printing Curse Words!
3. Fanfics About the 'Gargoyles' tv series and comics ONLY!
4. Mind your spelling and Grammar the best way you can!
5. If You're Gonnah Borrow Someone else's OC in a fic, Please Ask the owner First and Give them Credit for it!
6. Have Fun!
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Post by kendal34 on Aug 20, 2017 19:46:18 GMT
Trapped WIP.rtf (14.47 KB) Trapped Chapter 2.rtf (19.57 KB) Trapped Chapter 3.rtf (17.44 KB) I've included the first three chapters for you to read over and see if there is anything you think needs to be changed. Like if you think Goliath should wear a communicator so he can talk to Elisa, which I think he should. Or if some scenes need more detail.
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Post by EmilyDfan on Aug 20, 2017 20:31:12 GMT
Oh You don't have to send me a copy of it before Posting! And You don't Have to Change details Within the story, That parts Entirely up to You!  All I mainly care about is Decency, For instance if there are any Really Bad Curse Words just Code or block them like this (S***, F***, and ect) And also if there are Any Blood and gory scenes or Sexual stuff just TONE it down or just give a quick hint and quickly cut to the end of it, For example if a violent bloody crime is being committed DON'T write out ALL of the Exact details of the gore and the procedure! After all not Everyone can handle reading about such displayed violence. And For the Sexual stuff part, the couple can mention a quick hint of what the other wants to do to the other and them starting in Bed or whatever Can be Mentioned, But DON'T go into Exact details of the activity! Either cut to another story plot that's going on or the End of the activity! There could Be Young People Reading this Site for Goodness Sakes! But Other than That You Can Totally Write Anything you Want!  |
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Post by kendal34 on Aug 20, 2017 20:49:38 GMT
Say for example, I don't go into exact detail on the beginning of the surgery. Dr. Grey asks a question about keeping Broadway alive until sunrise and then it cuts to Brooklyn feeling faint and gripping the window frame from loss of blood. Xanatos joins him and then Brooklyn goes back to watching the surgery.
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Post by EmilyDfan on Aug 20, 2017 21:24:41 GMT
I Accept It! Just Don't go into Details about the Wound itself and the gory details of the Surgery procedure!
And it's a PG-13 fic that contains dark stuff like that, always do give a warning about that with the Author Disclaimer
EX) "Warning: This Fic is PG-13 and Contains Dark graphic stuff!..." and Etc
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Post by kendal34 on Aug 20, 2017 21:32:06 GMT
Oh, after that it cuts to Goliath and Elisa searching the warehouse for clues. Then that means this story would be PG.
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Post by EmilyDfan on Aug 20, 2017 21:41:22 GMT
Okey Dokey then!
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Post by kendal34 on Aug 20, 2017 22:20:12 GMT
Here is one idea I want to use:
* Angela tries to get Broadway out onto the roof. It would be easier for Goliath to find them.
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Post by EmilyDfan on Aug 20, 2017 22:33:31 GMT
That would Work!
it worked in the 'Enter Macbeth' episode when he found Elisa, Hudson, and Broadway on a building roof
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Post by kendal34 on Aug 20, 2017 22:36:02 GMT
I'm trying to stay true to what happened in the cartoon.
This is one I am currently using:
* Broadway and Angela decide to split up but instead of following Angela's plan, Broadway starts to move in the opposite direction but stops and notices the Quarrymen are heading in the direction that Angela went so he decides to follow them to make sure they don't find Angela.
The second idea is one I want to use:
* During the battle, Broadway jumps out of a window to escape and the battle moves out onto the roof. I've noticed that in Eye Of The Beholder, there was a window on the right side of the meat locker when Fox jumped through it to escape Xanatos.
* When Goliath goes out on patrol, he always wears a communicator and so does Elisa so she can talk to Goliath.
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Post by EmilyDfan on Aug 20, 2017 22:55:31 GMT
And I Encourage that! ^_^
Both Broadway And Angela should, they Love Each other after all
And I agree, Elisa and Lexington anf Broadway did so in the 'Double Jeopardy' Episode, So I see no reason why she and Goliath would'nt do the Same
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Post by kendal34 on Aug 20, 2017 23:01:36 GMT
I also think it would make more sense if Goliath and Brooklyn were following Elisa on her patrol in the second chapter. It would be out of character for Goliath not to follow Elisa if he thinks she could be a target for Castaway.
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Post by EmilyDfan on Aug 20, 2017 23:26:46 GMT
I Agree! Plus does Love her!
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Post by kendal34 on Aug 20, 2017 23:45:33 GMT
I opened the second chapter with Goliath and Brooklyn stopping some crime in Central Park but I will have to change it to them following Elisa on her patrol.
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Post by EmilyDfan on Aug 20, 2017 23:49:23 GMT
Ok!
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